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#21
Critics' Lounge / Re: House/Woods C&C
Sun 09/07/2006 11:32:34
Here's a quick edit :



*Added some shadows to give the house a less flat look
*Outlined the house a little bit more clearly to give depth and define the borders of each surface
*A few "misplaced" pixels fixed
*Added icicles to give the house a less flat feeling
*Gave the tree a more realistic look

Hope that helps, great job other than that!
#22
Critics' Lounge / Re: Color Exercise C&C
Fri 07/07/2006 03:04:56
Thanx for the crits :)
I think that the tree reflections are positioned correctly given that the sun is in quite some distance from the water body and the reflections should be almost vertical to the ground.

About the hills reflection, you are correct on the leftmost outcrop since it IS supposed to be a hill, I'll correct that as soon as possible.

As for the custom brush for the large tree, I noticed it looks bad and corrected it right after posting the image, I'll post the correct version sometime tomorrow.

All in all, it is a color exercise and I skipped alot of prespective/general feeling touches to focus on the colors matching.

Thanx for the comments once more :)
#23
It's really good. The only thing I can see that needs correction is what BunnyMilk mentioned. You should highlight the left breast to define it and leave the armpit shadow as it is. You might also want to remove the motion "feel" the hair has and make it more like the original.
#24
Critics' Lounge / Color Exercise C&C
Fri 07/07/2006 01:07:57
Well it's not a background, although it could work as a general background scene with a foreground addition. It's a color exercise and my second attemp with a sunset. All critics appreciated :)

#25
Critics' Lounge / Dark Forest Bridge
Tue 27/06/2006 00:51:40
C&C please, the bottom part will contain a water body (I'm having trouble with that for now)



2x
#26
Critics' Lounge / Standard old looking room
Sun 25/06/2006 23:19:11
Basic structure test for a pixel-art background. I could use some c&c for prespectives, "feel" of the room and whatever. As soon as I'm happy with the result I'll add the details (doors, debris, light sources etc).

#27
Could use some C&C ( Don't mind the proportions )



#28
Critics' Lounge / Sunset
Tue 30/05/2006 02:18:35


Second background, C&C pls :B
#29
Thanx :D I'll replace the lens flare with a general light effect. I have a problem with the behind-the-house scenery. Using that prespective, I couldn't find anything that would fit :/
#30
First background and I could use some ideas about what should be behind the house.

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