Regardless of who wins, thank you all for leaving your thoughts/comments on the entries. It's really nice & helpful to read your thoughts. Thanks for taking the time to do that.
I have to honestly admit I voted for Breakfast since I really enjoyed the story in that one.
Kastchey, the Fhaldirs being a mixture of Jedi & Elves is absolutely the blend I was going for! Nice to hear it was recognised! (I do plan on continuing this one but rather not commit to that and disappoint, but yes, I'm trying out some stuff. The important thing is to keep it small otherwise I'll get overwhelmed I feel! Episodic is the way to go with this one probably)
Heltenjon, I like how you caught the details with the sister. Also
I have to honestly admit I voted for Breakfast since I really enjoyed the story in that one.
Kastchey, the Fhaldirs being a mixture of Jedi & Elves is absolutely the blend I was going for! Nice to hear it was recognised! (I do plan on continuing this one but rather not commit to that and disappoint, but yes, I'm trying out some stuff. The important thing is to keep it small otherwise I'll get overwhelmed I feel! Episodic is the way to go with this one probably)
Heltenjon, I like how you caught the details with the sister. Also
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Did you try to go into her room after making the potion? It's a minor detail again, but it felt important to me.
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