Ok, I'm from The Netherlands, so it's not my first language, but here is a version, that's probably better
Nice poem bytheway... try this :
Longer you can not live,
and there's not other way to go
What is lost you can not give
or take it back to life and show.
...still, I think the poem is too much written to sound like it HAS to rhyme. Try to avoid this. Here is my little poem, that you'll get to see at the end of my game Ralph the Raven.
A few days later he flew away,
to another forest, to another day
If you want to see him fly
just turn your head up to the sky
and wave Ralph the Raven a goodbye!

Longer you can not live,
and there's not other way to go
What is lost you can not give
or take it back to life and show.
...still, I think the poem is too much written to sound like it HAS to rhyme. Try to avoid this. Here is my little poem, that you'll get to see at the end of my game Ralph the Raven.
A few days later he flew away,
to another forest, to another day
If you want to see him fly
just turn your head up to the sky
and wave Ralph the Raven a goodbye!