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#1
Critics' Lounge / Re: basic pixel-art graphic
Sat 20/01/2007 20:27:19
Thanks guys for your opinions.
I was improved my image and created 2 sprites (based on the Simonsez paint-over) with 2 different directions of head.
1x:
     
2x:
     

Also, I was made version with bigger eyes, where he isn't looks too happy:
1x

2x


What do you think about it?

Quote from: monkey_05_06 on Fri 19/01/2007 21:15:26
Also that bright blue in those jeans burn my retinas. :=
I hope your eyes are in good condition :)

PS. Unfortunately, this nice man without arms isn't for any game, but I'll think 'bout it.
#2
Critics' Lounge / basic pixel-art graphic
Fri 19/01/2007 21:05:08
Hello,

What do you think about this image?
1x:

2x:

8x:


Every critic will be advisable

thanks,
Moebius
#3
Hey guys, thanks for your criticism

Sorry for the links and bmps but I isn't matter that I don't know how to do it but I just havn't got much time. Now I havn't got much time too, so you'll not saw the images at forum :( (But the truth is that I was first put here images in bmp and I saw the funny picture with "I'm with stupid" txt (or something like this) )

Ow, and the host thing - I use my own server and I don't want to change him ;)

I'm still workin' on the background - and I'll thought about your sugestions.
I'm go for the holidays (at the moment :D), so I'll worry about that later.

The aliens are in cartoon style and size of their hads are intended (fi number ;) )

When I'll back than I'll put here the updated version.

Thanks,
Moebius



#4
Hello everybody.

I just wrap paintin' the background up and I need some criticism.



Asaide from room background I was drew these guys:
[Captain of the spaceship]

[Ordinary worker]

[Not ordinary worker]

And here you are. Everybody in the spaceship:

http://www.misniakiewicz.org/images/roomall.jpg

What do you think about it? Criticize please.

PS. The size of the black zones in those 2 images of the spaceship may be diffrent but It's a little variation ;)

Thank you advance,
Moebius
#5
Critics' Lounge / Re: room of Max&Jay
Sun 05/06/2005 10:45:32
Hey, the door must be metal! (specification of plot)

But, yeah, it looks strange, so I make some correction.
I add the scenery outside and fixed outline of light bulb.
Additionaly I add a blur-effect to painting.





#6
Critics' Lounge / room of Max&Jay
Sun 05/06/2005 09:47:27
Hello guys,

I need criticism:



That office room was created to my one-room-game. Alas, becouse of his specific style I will had troubles with drawn characters (2, btw they will be static but the animations...). So I put this picture here becouse I want to know what you think abot it. If that style goin' down to you I'll try to paint characters.

(sorry for my language mistakes but I still studing English)

Thanks for your attention,
Moebius
#7
Critics' Lounge / Re: Jac unholstering gun
Tue 17/05/2005 15:10:12
Oh man....
these shadows,
this "Cat's move",
wheeeeeeeee....
man, man, man...
amazing, beutiful!!!!!!!
Keep on truckin'

(I just haven't got remarks it's... //luck of words)
#8
Critics' Lounge / Re: pic
Tue 17/05/2005 14:55:23
Very nice!
You drawing with tablet?
#9
Yeah, you should draw the statues, paintings and tureens by yourself.
That things and your own graphic not go together.
And the floor looks strange. Maybe you should remove this black lines.

But besides, good job!
#10
Critics' Lounge / Re: Police officer
Wed 27/04/2005 20:50:59
Just add two black pixels...;)
#11
Critics' Lounge / Re: Background: Sewer
Wed 27/04/2005 20:32:07
And I think the light may reflect in the water (such a small effect - ray may wavy)
#12
Critics' Lounge / Re: Background: Sewer
Wed 27/04/2005 19:46:23
In your picture, the lamp not light up web , huh?
So, web should be dark.

#13
Critics' Lounge / Re: Police officer
Wed 27/04/2005 19:06:52
One question:

Where are his eyes??????????
#14
Critics' Lounge / Re: Background to be bashed.
Wed 27/04/2005 07:25:05
Really good work!

But I have some suggestions:

1. You can add more rays
2. Remove black border on the trees
3. Bottom of the mountain looks strangely (this bit in shadow)
4. Sky and sun are in diferent style than other but maybe it's calculated effect :)
#15
Hey man, that's the stuff!  8)
But I have one little remark:
You may "straighten" this guy (I mean , he is a little bend down)
But...maybe it's only perpective... ;)

And that's all. Keep on truckin'!

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