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overall i thing it's good, the perspecive,lights, those so far are nice,

let me add this bits..

i think you should vary on buildings, make the buildings outside not just the main, well theres should be the surrounding yes? and the building details, like bricks, profiles on doors,windows etc..

but hey, im no expert,only thinking out loud and suggesting!

again, you got nice stuff there..

more power mate!

'cheers!

Very well then,

actually, the artstyle of mine are nothing fancy,but if you guys could make somehing good from it i think it worth a try, (me never wrote a tutorial before)hehe.. And kinda dunno which forum part should i post my tutorial..

a pointers should be luvly,Hehe,

Ill try my best..

Thank you!

Thank you for the supports guys!this encouraging me work harder to finish the game..

'cheers!

thank you for the tutorial, i've learn alot about classic background drawing techniques from this...

noted zabnat, thanks! i do think so too, since there are alot of green there.. and the tape, yeah,that too.. thanks!

thank you, uhfgood.. that surely calms me down a bit from worrying, hehe.. well i think im going to stick on the last version, only adding a little bit this and that..

so, at the end, i really want to thank you to all people who have help me here alot improving my drawings..

more power to you guys,

'cheers

- The Monk -

meh, me forgot to describe that... ;p sorry, the game system info is updated..

hopefully the demo (or even the final) will be finished early next month, not too sure but ill update as soon i have the date.. this because english not my main so im getting help to perfect the grammer so you guys could enjoy the game..

thanks..

luv the drawing style mate, nice and sharp!.. permission to download!

'Cheers

Mein Gott! Ze Evil Trash Can!!



(revamped and made in png! )

well you can do that by turning the antialiasing first if you're using photoshop, but it probably hard to do if you already save the completed pictures in *.jpg format since that format worship the antialiasing..

the other way is try to scale it down using paint, i used to do that back then...

sorry not much of a help.. maybe theres other who experienced enough who can help you in this topic..

good luck mate...

[DOWNLOAD THE WORKING DEMO!:]

DOWNLOAD THE WORKING DEMO!:

can be downloaded from here currently, 3MB full of love.. Right Here!


act now! and fire away your comments and supportive critiques!

UPDATE NOTES:

I am sorry for missing from the board for awhile, This game is being suspended for a quite time, and nowI'm so glad that this game finally able to be continued, some real life conditions make me unable to work on this pieces, with the moving, working, enslavement, ect,

never lose hope, for the project will live on! looking forward for your critiques and comments!

ABOUT THE PROJECT:

This game is going to be a free short/medium length game, This game is prologue for the main game later (i do wish to create an interesting series! ), this one introduce you to the feel of the game, knowing the characters more. this one i hope could be a feedback for comments and critics that i hope will be useful when i work on the main big game. so far, good people here at the forums help me in scripting tutorials.. thanks guys! ALOT!

ABOUT THE GAME:

This game tells the story of one Hugo Greenback, a yet to be an experienced adventurer in the modern day. grandson of the famous adventurer,relic hunter,treasure scavenger, Sebastian Greenback that passed away about a year ago, this is the beginning of Hugo's hard times, being left behind with no jobs nor experiences. starting from scratch and make his first introduction to the world of treasures and relics hunting, can finally hugo set his steps in his late grandfather's trace? well, we find out soon in the end of the story.

PEOPLE WORKING ON THE GAME: (Currently)

Story & Scriptwriter : Monk & CaptainD

Puzzles : CaptainD

Game & Graphics : Monk

List Current Voice Talents :

kconan

(We still Need couple more for the Female Voice)

Music : Needed!

GAME SYSTEMS:

the game is running in the 640 x 480 resolution with true colors and full direct x support, the interface would be the ol' verbcoin implemented for AGS 3.0 by Elektroshokker.

SOME FEATURES FROM THE GAME :





screenshots from "apartment" and "coffee shop"

- Featuring the journal module by Akumayo (need to be fixed and revised)
- Easy to medium puzzles to solve
- Travel to the exotic countries! locations!
- and much more to explore.

Work In Progress :

Characters : 80% Done

Stories : 70% Done

Locations : 70 % Done (need more room details.. ;p)

Scriptings : 60% Done (one at a time baby... one at a time)

Sounds  : 90% (free sound clips make this one easy! yay!)

Grammars : 20% Me got bad English.. pweease help....

Musics  : none yet, interested to help me? please feel free to PM me for more info!

Voices : heck I'm bad at grammar. hehe, what will you think i sound like?... i need 4  people, or just one multivoiced man to do voice overs...

HELP REQUEST:

please PM me if you could help me developing the game, well this one maybe not a moneytree for you guys but i will be very grateful! and ya' names on the credits of course..  

LIST OF HELPING HAND NEEDED :

- Grammar Checker
- Story/Puzzle Advisor
- Scripting Advisor
- Voice Actors
- Music Makers

please kindly send me your PM if you interested in helping out finishing the game! any aspects are welcome!



finally i want to thank you to all people at the AGS community for helping me, support, and make me burning to keep my PC running and make games! more power to you guys!

Cheers'

- The Monk -

okay matti... thanks alot, ill see what i can do, meanwhille this some things i've change

- the shadows
- add some colors
- still green tho..



ill post the tweaked wall version soon...
much appreciate for the helps, i really need this, i want my first game to be satisfying..!

cheers

hmm.. green is that bad ya? very well i will give a couple shots with different colors for the wall before continue/releasing the game..

any color suggestions for the wall? thank you very much!

sweetness.. as terran said,perfectly drawn in 320 (totallyl classic rules! miss those days)

overall you're doing great! but what im suggesting are shadows, maybe some more complex shadows?

hope it helps..

yes, i realize that too terran, well since this game 'greenback' will be its first debut, i just want to point out to users in the 'character's' room that he likes the color green..

i will add some odds and end for the room later, boy i hope it brighten and vary the colors a bit.. hehe,

i will keep that in mind for the next room.. thanks terran,

phew, hope can make a topic at 'game in progress' later, this one really need betatesters to try and comment it by lookin' n tryin' it from a closer look.. ;p

p.s:

as for tutorials, i barely standing on my both feet here.. hehe, i think ill learn more myself so you wont be dissapointed wit the tutoril.. hehe, just pm me for maybe i can give some useful help..

this is sooo solved... back to making game! huzzah! thanks alot Elektro! looking forward to you uploading the module!

cheers!

If you remember the lips style like on the pop-art comic by andy warhol,or those classic 'john and jane' style comic those lips are masculine.. But its just a thought.. Or maybe you could make the talk button graphic display a full jaws instead just mouth/lips?

As for the help button, if i am the player of the game,i think i prefer help button better than a game info!

Wow,that's make me on fire! InCreator.. Since my english are not good,need quite a time to understand wht you mean,hehe. . But i get it now, let me do some more tweaks on the room,wallshadows,more colors.. And prepare the un-outlined character..

Much Thanks!

[Music Writers & Voice Actors (M/F) needed]

Music Writers & Voice Actors (M/F) needed

Im working on a small project,hopefully will be a saga/series later if theres a lot of people enjoys and demanding it..

The project called [greenback]©

Im looking forward to work together with  musicians and voice actors to be part of the team,
or just freelancing for this one intro project.

this project will be the beginning/promotional purpose for the next main games, this project will be a freeware so i cant give you nothing yet, but of course your names in the credits or the main titles will be my top priority!

if you would like to help me, which im very appreciate it, please send me a PM and let me know.

Thanks in advance,