It seems a bit dis-jointed. Like you've glued bits of photos on to a background.
Especially the bald, naked chick. Might be better with some sort of ethereal particle based swooshing around her, mimicking windy silkish clothes. Some hair would be nice, too.
I'm undecided as to a response to the flaring of the lenses.
Especially the bald, naked chick. Might be better with some sort of ethereal particle based swooshing around her, mimicking windy silkish clothes. Some hair would be nice, too.
I'm undecided as to a response to the flaring of the lenses.