Thanks again for everyones compliments 
Yes she loves the game and has completed it now. She especially liked the (obligatory) big twist at the end of the game
Yes, I will check with her before I make a demo but I know she will be happy to share it with you all.
Yes, I had thought of making a diary to make everything make sense but I think it would take just as long to do that as it would to rewrite the whole game into something more aimed towards the AGS community. For now though, I think I will just stick with making a demo.

Quote from: Snarky on Sat 08/03/2008 15:28:38
Great story, and the game looks hilarious!
BUT! You never told us how she reacted. What did she think of the game?
I guess if it was me I'd check with your sister before posting the game for everyone to download, to make sure that she's OK with it. It is her game, after all.
Yes she loves the game and has completed it now. She especially liked the (obligatory) big twist at the end of the game

Yes, I will check with her before I make a demo but I know she will be happy to share it with you all.
Quote from: Ali on Sat 08/03/2008 15:53:54
I'm sure a demo would be well recieved. If you had the time, you could always add things like diary entries / letters which would allow other players to understand the backstory and injokes a little better.
Yes, I had thought of making a diary to make everything make sense but I think it would take just as long to do that as it would to rewrite the whole game into something more aimed towards the AGS community. For now though, I think I will just stick with making a demo.