I actually disagree with Ben on the visible forehead thing. I liked the longish hair that goes all the way to his eyebrows. I did however make his eyes one pixel lower so that his forehead wouldn't look too small.
This is my take on the shading and colors. Also modified the face and hair a bit.


You were using a lot of "useless" colors in your latest version. I took the colors down to the minimum amount that is required for shaded sprites. I also used a bit less saturated colors.
You're off to a good start!
This is my take on the shading and colors. Also modified the face and hair a bit.


You were using a lot of "useless" colors in your latest version. I took the colors down to the minimum amount that is required for shaded sprites. I also used a bit less saturated colors.
You're off to a good start!