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Made the nose rounder/more natural, and removed some weird black outlines from her hair.

I'm really not worthy to crit this as it rocks the shit out of my mum... But here it goes. On the first "real" pic, there is something pouring from the skies. Unless there is a pipe or something above, i really can't see where the water is coming from, as rain usually dont take this shape. And the "towel-shelf" in the last pic seems to lack some debth. IMO it looks like a flat drawing of a shelf hanging in front of the wall. But the rest is just too good!

Some hundred years ago, an armorer lived in a small town in england. He made a living of making swords and such for the occupying soldiers. But eventually, the soldiers grew tired of his swords. Therefore, they decided that he would be excecuted unless he made a new and better weapon.
Fearing for his life, the armorer came up with a brilliant idea. A small-size catapult shooting small round objects, driven by a rubber band. He called it the "marble-tosser". But as the gun were not very powerful, and the soldiers got ridiculed every time they tried to shoot a marble at the citizens, the armorer were killed, and his invention died with him.



In newer times, secret blueprints of the tosser were found by a Samuel Colt. But instead of "marble-tosser", he called it "gun", as this sounded more manly and dangerous.

Sorry... Not an actual entry

God...

I think yoda have been getting way too little attention, and therefore he asks everyone "subtle" questions wether his graphics are good or bad, etc.
Why do you ask if we want you to make it, when you already put it in GiP and have plans for completing it?
Hammerite: There is a reason that they made the critic lounge. So people can move the discussion you are having here over there, so you stop clogging these threads.

To not get too off-topic: The game looks interresting. Original enough storyline and okay graphics. Keep up the work and finish your second game

Duh! *Slaps myself* I had the same problem with another pic some time ago!

Thanks for helping

Dr. Scary: We made it to fifth place last year This year we'll win the whole shablang! ^_^

As none of you know, I'm on the norwegian national rollersoccer team. And as geekiest of the group, I've been asked to set up a website, even though i've never done it before. I made a temporary website in dreamweaver and uploaded it to the server. But when i open the page in IE, I can't seem to see the main pic on the page. I can see the banner, but the pic is just replaced with the x in a white box.



Anyone got an idea on how to get this working? I haven't asked anyone else if they can see the pic yet, but you try yourself. http://www.rulleskoytefotball.org

ps. The white "what's wrong?" text is something i drew on in paint...

So i don't have to look up all the previous topics... does anyone have a list?

EDIT: Never mind I found my way to the mags website.

I apologize for the excessive use of mspain airbrush. I know it suxxorz, but i didnt want to spent an hour making decent waves.
Next: "lol"

I had this in critic lounge He's called Zapper... And that's what i thought about ^_^

NEXT: The End (no nukes or similar allowed)

Get a dog

Actually a very nice background. But the lens flare makes it all... no...

What strikes me is that the grass seems to "go under" the house in some places.
EDIT: The closest pillar is separated from the small roof with a thick black outline while the one further away isnt.
The window to the far left seems to be a completely different position compared to the two on the front, even though it seems to be the same kind of window.
The walkway seems to be floating over the grass. Try to add some grass growing up from between the stones maybe. Or something like that.

It looks great!

I didn't edit anything...-_-

I can't draw one...

Why not? :S

Anyway. Great topic! I'll see what i can make up. Save this spot for me

I did. It is slightly better, yes

Well, yoda, the graphics are about the same as in your first game, and the puzzles likewise. But you still have more to show for yourself than most here

Bwahahahaha Great one! Horrible graphics and bad storyline, but amusing! The worst thing is that you'll probably win due to no other competitors.

Guess how long it took me to make.

About the time it took you to find out that there were no other games?

Are anyone actually contacting eBay or Lucasarts about this? Or LucasFan for that sake?

What's wrong with these "people"?

I think he meant the human. His upper arm seems a bit thin compared to his hand and lower arm. You could either widen his upper arm, or make his hand smaller. Or keep it the way it is, if you really like the way it is right now.

Looks great Keep up the good work!