I really like it, but I'd go even further with the scrawling of 'day 2' to really give the impression that it is being drawn in blood. At the moment it's still 'cutting down' on the 'A' and 'Y' more than being scrawled.
Some 'fingernails across blackboard' sound effects would be great there too to add malice/menace. :o
Some 'fingernails across blackboard' sound effects would be great there too to add malice/menace. :o