[HELP FOUND] [HELP FOUND] MAGS - Proofreaders - Lema Sabachthani

[Billbis]

Hey!
I'm making a Game for the February MAGS, called Lema Sabachthani.
It needs some proofreading as English is not my native language. So if someone is volunteer to proofread it, he or she will gain my eternal gratitude and some thanks in the credits. The MAGS end on March the 2nd, so I need proofreading as soon as possible.
Here's the .trs file (~9ko).
If possible, write the corrected sentence the line bellow the faulty one, and send the file back to me here or in a PM.
Obviously, warning! heavy spoilers inside!
Thanks!

[straydogstrut]

PM sent, hope it's of some use

Good luck!

[Billbis]

Thanks !