Haiku maybe help? (now also with limerics!)

Trapezoid · Tue 01/04/2003 05:52:02

Don't be so morbid...
...Loss of sticky preserval...
...Doesn't mean jack shit

Dmitri · Tue 01/04/2003 06:14:31

If anything trap
D G did this a favour
now we will not stop

TheYak · Tue 01/04/2003 07:09:18

The thread is unglued
Much like an AGSer
When AGS crash

--

The springtime is here
New birds bunnies and flowers
Where is cyanide?

Scummbuddy · Tue 01/04/2003 07:15:47

Just remember friend
Not everywhere in the world
where spring bring warm temps.

TheYak · Tue 01/04/2003 08:49:11

Some don't like haiku
They all stand back and make fun
Alas they are dead.

Dmitri · Tue 01/04/2003 10:37:33

Within the confines
of a dark secluded place
eyes bitterly weep

they are all alone
crying for the bitterness
of love and hatred

they are all alone
crying for passion and lust
envy and revenge

evil is the heart
which made these eyes start weeping
no one hears its pleas

happy is the face
which the world avidly views
it always will smile

grieving are the eyes
who the world does detest
they find no solace

that is my haiku
I will try harder next time
I will use action

jannar85 · Tue 01/04/2003 11:01:36

I didn't even
bother to notice
this single thread

Since I thought
it was already
quite read

I didn't know
that it was
so cool

But that was
before
I started to drool

I'm a poet
that's right,
that's right!

So don't even
dare to start
a fight

I see this
is the first
thread ever

to pass the
13th major
haiku pages

I could hope
I will now
be accepted.

(Hee)

Dmitri · Tue 01/04/2003 11:11:08

either you are good
or do not know the real rules
five seven and five

count the syllables
and the secret of haiku....
are forever yours

there is haiku that
does not conform to these rules
I do not know these

jannar85 · Tue 01/04/2003 11:32:14

Haiku is not
the best
I can do

But I think
you know that as well..
You do too!

I'm serious here
trying to learn
Haiku... shit I'm going to burn!

Haiku I'm trying to learn
today. But I'm not able to to this
before upcoming wednesday.

I found this dummies for Haiku's
and I'm not that good
But I'll give it a try, with other words.

*** edit ***
I don't undertand
the meaning of Haiku
either.

It says it needs
five, seven, and five
but I see some using more or less

So this is what
I don't understand
Haiku rules? What's that again?

Dmitri · Tue 01/04/2003 12:40:01

ignore the lamers
who do not abide the rules
five seven and five

that is the haiku
there is not one substitute
five seven and five

when time is on side
try to use the haiku right
it is rewarding

TheYak · Wed 02/04/2003 04:20:18

Your sig confuses
An Iqu quote with my name
Saw this before where?

Dmitri · Wed 02/04/2003 05:48:15

Back on icq
Our names appear within < and >
I know not who said

I thought it Yakspit
But my memory is bad
I will change my sig

Las Naranjas · Wed 02/04/2003 06:44:18

you mean ICQ?
perhaps you are mistaken
IRC perhaps

Dmitri · Wed 02/04/2003 07:27:06

shut up naranjas
I get confused easily
when both start with I

TheYak · Wed 02/04/2003 07:30:19

And was I quite wrong
Or did the original
sig have name Iqu?

Dmitri · Wed 02/04/2003 07:36:27

no Iqu was not
in the original sig
you just misread it

Probably again
with the I thing we confuse
this haiku sense not

TheYak · Wed 02/04/2003 07:43:37

Iqu IRC
IMO and IRQ
Too many "I" things

Acronyms rule me
As a part of daily life
Not use? You're a n00b.

Dmitri · Sat 05/04/2003 09:22:05

Shit I just noticed
This thread wasn't on page one
I revive it now

this; happy haiku

WanderLady · Wed 14/05/2003 01:47:23

Felt need to express;
Putting thoughts into few words
Good for succinct man

12431 · Thu 15/05/2003 19:00:15

god. i hate haiku's
to me they make little sence
they don't even rhyme!

I wouldn't make haiku's
not even if i got paid
cause haiku's are lame.