Teh sexy bluecup

Started by BruisedWeasel, Sun 11/05/2003 05:40:33

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BruisedWeasel

I started this early yesterday morning and just finished it now. I don't like the postition of the character, the hand looks wrong, and her left shin is far too thin. Other than that, any crit?



and because I like to record projects that take a while, here's an animation of the steps I took:

Andail

She's really cool...I love the recording, that will be a fine tutorial for people

Renal Shutdown

Hey

Hm...  took a while, but worth the wait.  I'm not sure her leg's as dangerously thin as you made out, tho.  She looks kinda southern.

Hugs Y'all
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Neole

No crits - very stylish and very well drawn.

Ben

Looks good. I like the style of shading you have there. The face looks really good too.

I'm not sure about the pose though. I'm not sure if she could stand like that in real life, unless she was leaning against a wall on her left side..

Sluggo

Flamingo woman looks exellent.

BruisedWeasel

Quote from: Sluggo on Sun 11/05/2003 23:40:58
Flamingo woman looks exellent.

;D Yes, I really do hate that pose. I tend not to care about the subject's ability to maitain its pose. I just bend whatever limb I wish in whatever direction I feel would give me an oportunity for practice. Thanks for all the positive comments. Now that they're out of the way, maybe someone could stop by and start nitpicking.

DragonRose

The facial features seem a bit far down on the head.



A little edit, I hope you don't mind. I just moved the eyes and lips a bit further up.  You did a fantastic job on the shading, though, which I can't do for shit.  Good job.
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BruisedWeasel

#8
Wow, that little edit made a huge difference in her expression. She looks much colder now. It would look really good if I straightened out her flamingo leg.

And thank you for the compliment concerning my shading. I'm not confident in my shading skills, which is partly why I kept her clothing to a minimum.

DGMacphee

This isn't really a crit, but the hair falling back makes it look like she has very hair armpits.

And that's cool, if you like that sort of things.
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n3tgraph

I don't know if I'm right, but her right boobs seems to fall a bit out of place

But I could be wrong

Great picture Melia! :)
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Eggie

*puts on GIR voice*
She's got elf eaaars

tychooo

very nice, but maybe she've soo small feets?

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