Future fantasy girl C&C please..

[Synthetique]

This is a character for a future fantasy adventure/rpg game.
Anything that I should change or add?



Any comments appreciated..

[big brother]

What has she got to be so damn happy about? Grrrr...

[Minimi]

She looks great, and nicely detailed. The only thing that bothers me is the face. Is she laughing constantly? I'd make the mouth a little smaller, and add a nose to the face.

but very good work!

[Synthetique]

that's not supposed to be her normal face.. i liked that smile so i posted her with it..

i tried making a nose but it didnt look good.. on the side view you will see it tho..

[Phemar]

Her eyes being black make it look to dark. I like your sprite,good work. I'd like to see her normal  view though....

[kaaZ]

Hey Synthetique, Realy good sprite...I did a quick edit :



- Added some Highlight on top of her hair.
- Made here buttocks more present.
- Turned up the contrast (Maybe to much...but I like to     overdo on contrast).

Hope this helps

kaaZ

[Synthetique]

hmmm... i will certainly consider those buttocks..
or maybe not.. theyre too low... i'll see what i can do..

[Andail]

Kaaz's modification is excellent in many ways, although the shorts should have been enlarged too, lest some might call it sexistic...

Apart from that, the sprite is really neat

PS: Synth; the buttocks are not too low in Kaaz's version! In fact, they are still far from natural, whereas your version looks more like manga. And whenever I see intimite female body parts drawn in a japanese style, I sort of react

[Chicky]

the first thing that stood out to me with this sprite was the breast. I think they looks a lil saggy, and should be pushed up. I understand that those are the imprints of the armour, bur surley she wouldnt be hanging free inside it? Due to the female bra, the chest is pushed up to make everything more secure.

thats all really

mmmmmmmm breasts

-OSC

[TheDude]

It's a nice sprite, but it looks a little strange how her arms are behind her butt on the front view but not behind it on the back view.

[Synthetique]

does it really matter as you in the game cant both views at one? i like changes.. it's more alive..

[Haddas]

Her legs look almost too strong in my opinion. and the the breasts

[DanClarke]

lose the hair, it makes her look like an annoying TV presenter. I dont think i could put up with looking at her for any long periods of time. Looks good though.  

[Scummbuddy]

well, i think the hair is just fine. sorry Dan, I do appreciate your comments everwhere though, but Im surprised no one has done a face change for him to help out. It'll come.

[LordHart]

Is it just me or does anyone else see the resemblance between this character and Melanie Griffiths character 'E' from Cherry 2000?

[earlwood]

Sweet sprite, though kaaZ's edit seems to have a little cheek leakage.

The only suggetion I can give is to replace her legs with rockets and her face..with more rockets...that otta 'future' her up a bit.

[Phemar]

I like Kaaz's edit mainly because he upped the contrast so much. I like it that way. I agree with OSC that the boobs look a little saggy, as if she were in her 50's. *shudders*

[synth]

I quess i could bring the boobs up about two pixels.. that should do it.. i dont want an unnatural look tho.. most guys draw the boobs at the end of the neck..

[MrColossal]

I think they're just fine the way they are, leave'em.

If that's how she looks that's how she looks but you could do for some contrast in the colours a little more

whatever happened the to little purple cutey alien?

[sedriss]

She reminds me of Ruby Wax.

Great Job btw.