Antagonizing Janice

[Mr_Frisby]

Drew this today - thought it was a little entertaining.
Let me know what you think - (dont say i need therapy Ã, )

[pslim]

Hahaha. This is great, Mr_Frisby. I really enjoyed the subtlety of the humor. Heh heh this could be on its way to syndication.

[Ali]

It's very like Edward Gorey, though a little less terse and obscure. The character's bewildered expressions are great. I'd love to see it inked, and not on lined paper!

The only improvement I'd suggest would be to order the vignettes more carefully, and dispense with the 3D arrows (which seem to have been photoshopped in?).

[PureGhostGR]

Very nice and quite funny to read. I did enjoy the face expressions in both her and the dogs.

Well done! 

[Kweepa]

Great stuff!
It suffers somewhat from illegibility, but not as much as Eggie's work.

[Mr Flibble]

Reminded me of Quentin Blake's work, and thats no bad thing.

[Mr_Frisby]

Thanks for the loverly comments - I love gorey and quentin blake so thanks.

Ali - Duly noted - as these are a couple of panels that worked form my sketch book I just stuch them together in gimp (to cheap for fotoshop (too cheap to us the letters ph at the start of foto). Thus the lined paper and drawn in biro (blue pen).

The labrador makes me laugh most -  oh and the concept of crotch bulbs.

Cheers,
thanks for responding.

(ps "It suffers somewhat from illegibility, but not as much as Eggie's work." Ha H!)

[Mr_Frisby]

Monkeys broke wind near me and this happened!
Hope the swearing isn't to offensive to you young inocent pups.



Sometimes I feel sorry for my toons because of all the crazy stuff I get them to do so I think "hey should I let them say how it makes them feel?"
Then I think "neh ! stuff them."


Then I think "Hey , a cookie!"


hints due to illegibility are below:

Spoiler

Janice here is a little apprehensive:
"I'm a little apprehensive, I've not been in a cartoon before"
"Cartoonists always make you look dumb, What if they get me to do something stupid . ."
"and I'm made to look a total fool . . . probably he'll give me bunnyears at some point"
"Yeah! and then that sonovabitch will start making fun of my buck teeth"
"That motherfucker, how dare he!, what did I do to him the prick?!"
"Hey cartoonist I've changed my mind!"
"Giant Fukstiks!"

[close]

[Babar]

Reminded me of Quentin Blake's work, and thats no bad thing.

Exactly what I thought when I saw it! Enjoyable humour too. Reminds me of Roald Dahl's extensive explanation of the The Twits.

[ThreeOhFour]

Heh heh heh... Me likey. Nicely abnormal, fantastic work.