Neole's art-thread - 25 December : Merry Christmas!!

AndersM · Tue 20/05/2003 20:18:54

Ok: The big-titted girl sees a big-gunned tank... Nice. You caught all the things a man likes in one picture: Over-sized weapons and over-sized Hrmm-hmmm.. And now the ctritisism: The turret on the tank looks unsymethric (Is that an english word?): it looks like the tank is about to tip over to the left (girl's point of view).

Neole · Wed 21/05/2003 07:58:39

Thanks Igor - when an artist like you praises my work its always an honour!

MrMasse - thanks for that analysis, I hadnt thought about that implication of the image hehheh. You're right about the tank, its just that I'm plain bad at drawing straight lines and stuff, am trying to practise that part with some of these drawings.

Neole · Wed 21/05/2003 08:02:15

There's one thing very wrong with the man's pose that spoils the feeling of having been just knocked out. Anyone?

Synthetique · Wed 21/05/2003 19:34:51

where is her feet? i'm staring at them wobbles where they are supposed to be.. but my brain wont patch it up...

AndersM · Wed 21/05/2003 20:00:41

Angry girls are just soooo hot. Especially when they wear a top like that...

The mans pose is (like you mentioned) somewath wrong..
it loooks more like if he sits relaxed and comfortabel on a picnic blanket or something.

And due to the fact that the girl's feets sink down in the grass, the man seems to hoover above it.
But I dunno, I might be wrong. I have been wrong before. In June '87 i think it was...

Igor · Thu 22/05/2003 10:18:50

Great as usual! Love your comic style

I don't really think there's anything wrong with man's pose. He looks perfectly knocked down to me.
Well... since you were asking for suggestions, Here's a quick little edit.
But I'm not sure if he looks any more knocked down this way.

n3tgraph · Thu 22/05/2003 10:35:30

lol, great picture neole

he probably said something about her breasts

Neole · Thu 22/05/2003 14:22:45

Synth - I tried to bury them in the grass but the attempt failed I guess. The guy should have been lower as mrMasse said.

MrMasse - you're right on both points. I think I was there that time in '87 when you pressed the nuke button instead of the coffee dispensing one.

Igor, that hit the spot perfectly! Your addition makes the exact statement I was looking for, thanks!

Hehheh N3T, you're probly right. Hmm.. but then that won't explain the tears..

Neole · Thu 22/05/2003 14:30:50

These are concept sketches for the main character for a strip called Missy Goth. Slightly over one hour for the bunch. Which do you think is best for a goth humor comic strip with a vampyress as the main character?

n3tgraph · Thu 22/05/2003 15:01:12

why not?

If he said:

"Ooooh, I just love your breasts"

then she says:

"That's great, but what about me"

then he says:

"Oooooh, I just love your BREASTS"

explenation needed?

Synthetique · Thu 22/05/2003 15:17:16

i'd like to see more detail in a comic strip...

Proskrito · Thu 22/05/2003 15:43:15

i like them all, but my favourites are #5 and #4 (in this order)
(#4 is hot! you could make her fight with buffy in a pool full of mud)

AndersM · Thu 22/05/2003 21:28:37

It's not my fault that those buttons looks the same....

Evil · Thu 22/05/2003 21:33:21

I agree 4 looks the best. Though I do like 6's shoes...

Trapezoid · Thu 22/05/2003 21:52:31

Man, those girls have terrible postures.

Neole · Fri 23/05/2003 06:00:16

N3T, hehhhe, now the whole pic makes sense

Synth: these are concept sketches, not the comic

Proskrito, I love #4 too. I dont think we can go with 5 though cos she looks a bit older than required. Maybe we can assign a role for her as Missy's godmom or something.

MrMasse: That was cryptic! I am completel clueless bout that statement..

Evil: Will put #6's shoes on #4 then.

Trap, they're undead, its a surprise they even have posture!

The producer of the strip likes #1 for some reason.. will have to convince him otherwise.

Neole · Fri 23/05/2003 06:06:15

She's a cyborg. Couldnt resist the title.

AndersM · Fri 23/05/2003 19:02:23

It's not my fault that those buttons looks the same.... was the answer to

QuoteMrMasse - you're right on both points. I think I was there that time in '87 when you pressed the nuke button instead of the coffee dispensing one.

Is the cyborg 'refilled' in some kind of way?

Neole · Sat 24/05/2003 08:31:29

Ah I get you now (feels silly!)

The cyborg is not being refilled, she is not a milk-dispensing-infant-care-cyborg. That was stopped after they started implanting auto-milk-producing-chips inside infant cheeks in 2764. This one is just being tested for proper electronic functioning before release.

Neole · Sat 24/05/2003 08:33:08