A character to criticise...

Started by Nacho, Sat 17/01/2004 19:26:46

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Nacho

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Yup... I´ve been aware of most of the things you said, the hair and the costume. Of course, as Indy, Arizona will have to wear two diferent costumes, one for "camp" and another one for "campus". I think I´ll also draw two heads, one with the brushed hair (greased, maybe, as in the 40es people had long hair, actually, but greased).

Great picture, though... I´ll add them to my photo-reference folder (It is pretty filled now, air bases pics, jackets, cities...)

Thanks.  ;)

Edit: Gotcha! Maybe the boots have more sense now?  this will be for the university rooms...

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La Lore

I´ve been testing colours. Farlander thinks the colors are too bright... what do you think? :)



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JimmyShelter

The colours of the girl on the right seem too bright, doesn't look very old fashioned that way. Maybe add some hints of brown?

Darth Mandarb

I think they might be just a little on the bright side.

The first one:
A woman in 1941 wouldn't be wearing a mini-skirt.  Skirt lengths at that time would have been below the knees (or lower even).  And the blue of the skirt feels too bright.  The pink sweater doesn't bother, just the blue!

The second one:
More suitable colors and feels more 1940's to me.  The beret works too, though gives her more of a French feeling.  The pants/boots look great!

Hope that helps!

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GarageGothic

Farlander, I'm glad you could use the reference pic. I think the sweater is perfect for the university setting. I don't know about the t-shirt underneath though. Until the early 50s, t-shirts were pretty much consider underwear. I think a casual shirt, possibly short sleeved, although you wouldn't see that anyway, would be more fitting. But it depends on what you're going for of course.

As for the female character, I agree with Darth Mandarb that the one to the right is much better (the one on the left has a very 1980s look to her with those pastels). But you might even want to desaturate her clothes even more. I actually prefer the tan shirt in the earlier version.

n3tgraph

how about this outfit??

anyone??  8)


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Hueij

Quote from: N3TGraph on Wed 21/01/2004 16:27:47
how about this outfit??

anyone??  8)



Replace the boots with high heels and you have a winner!  8)

Nacho

 >:( It´s a rip off from Hueij´s avatar!!!1!  >:(
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n3tgraph

ah please, just one scene?  ::)
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Fantômas

Don't you think the name Arizona Scott is a little too similar to Indiana Jones? Is there a charachter named Washington Smith too?

Nacho

It is intended... and not definitive...

Oklahoma Johnson, Colorado Smith...

It has to have a state as a nickname, as it will be an Indy parody.
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Fantômas

Oh. Well, if its a parody I think you shouldn't have him as a student of Indiana Jones, he should be like an alternate Indiana or something...or not....

Nacho

Sure... But I made the Barnett School room and I wanted to link it to Indy in some way, so...
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