Check out my character

[ramon82]

Hi all

I will be creating my kick ass game in a month and a half time

Take a look at the game's character in two formats...

http://www.geocities.com/lordtekno99/character.bmp
http://www.geocities.com/lordtekno99/character.jpg


Please suggestions and criticism!  

Tnx all

[ramon82]

Darn the images cant load I am having probs with geocities  


I am signing up with someone else

[n3tgraph]

hey that's great!

Mr, Big head - I like it (note, if it supposed to be a normal guy, his head is too big) cool style

2 things:
- the light outline will do, but it somewhat looks strange, but I don't know what to do about it.
- His armpits are a bit weird

But it's very cool

[ramon82]

tnx mate

you have no problems watching them? cos I cant view them on my PC...may be theres a downtime

[ramon82]

PLEASE USE THESE LINKS TO VIEW MY CHARACTER:


http://lordtekno.mysitespace.com/character.bmp
http://lordtekno.mysitespace.com/character.jpg


COMMENTS PLZ  :

[n3tgraph]

there you go

A few hints for you:
- save the files as .gif - better quality in lo res
- use http://www.2dadventure.com/upload/upload.html  to upload your images to internet (thanks to neole)

you can use the [ url] past the url here [/url ]  tags (without the spaces) to show images on the board

[ramon82]

tnx for da info dude  

[ramon82]

I would like more comments about my character pls!!  

http://lordtekno.mysitespace.com/character.bmp

[n3tgraph]

heh be a little patient :

[Archangel (aka SoupDragon)]

The light outlines do look a little... strange. But then, it's better than I could do so I can't really complain.

hint: instead of posting more than once after yourself it's better to use the 'edit' button; and don't "bump" (post to bring the thread up the page) unless it's off the first page of the board and you haven't received a satisfactory reply.

[n3tgraph]

The light outlines do look a little... strange. But then, it's better than I could do so I can't really complain.

hint: instead of posting more than once after yourself it's better to use the 'edit' button; and don't "bump" (post to bring the thread up the page) unless it's off the first page of the board and you haven't received a satisfactory reply.

editing a post doesn't bring it up again... But I do think the 'new' icon is there again

[Archangel (aka SoupDragon)]

The light outlines do look a little... strange. But then, it's better than I could do so I can't really complain.

hint: instead of posting more than once after yourself it's better to use the 'edit' button; and don't "bump" (post to bring the thread up the page) unless it's off the first page of the board and you haven't received a satisfactory reply.

editing a post doesn't bring it up again...

Note the semicolon, which seperates two clauses.

[ramon82]

Well I ve designed the character today and I only spent about 15mins using MS Paint.  

However I think that I will be using it in my game, maybe modifying some things. I think the light outline is nice because it gives the character that 2D look and it looks as if light is reflecting around the character. Well I will think about it  

Tnx...MORE COMMENTS!!!!  

[n3tgraph]

The light outlines do look a little... strange. But then, it's better than I could do so I can't really complain.

hint: instead of posting more than once after yourself it's better to use the 'edit' button; and don't "bump" (post to bring the thread up the page) unless it's off the first page of the board and you haven't received a satisfactory reply.

editing a post doesn't bring it up again...

Note the semicolon, which seperates two clauses.

it does?
oh well    :

[Phemar]

The light outlines do look a little... strange. But then, it's better than I could do so I can't really complain.

hint: instead of posting more than once after yourself it's better to use the 'edit' button; and don't "bump" (post to bring the thread up the page) unless it's off the first page of the board and you haven't received a satisfactory reply.

editing a post doesn't bring it up again...

Note the semicolon, which seperates two clauses.

it does?
oh well  :-[  ::)

Sorry, had to carry on, anyway, maybe replace the light outlines with darker color of the thing it's outlining...

[Das Plans]

Hiya,

I really like your character. It might sound odd, but he reminds me of a guy I used to know. And let me tell you this: women adored him.  

The only things I would work on are the light outlines. But that has been said before, anyway.

Then there´s something about his armpits. Looks strange to me, but I´m not sure how I would fix it. Maybe put the chest in front of the arms, if you know what I mean. But it´s just an idea.

Great work!