Arab dude for C&C

Karimi · Fri 16/04/2004 07:49:28

First of all , whats C & C ? Is it like constructive criticism ?

Anyway here is a sort of arab fellow im making for a game called "Nomads Adventure" . Nothing is definite and this is some concept art.

Peter Thomas · Fri 16/04/2004 07:59:13

C&C means comments and criticism, but really - constructive criticism is just as good. It can stand for Corn and Cauliflower for all I care

The only thing I noticed was maybe his arms are slightly misproportionate to the size of his body?

The wrists are EXTREMELY skinny....

But, apart from that - you've got one cool arab on your hands...

Karimi · Fri 16/04/2004 08:17:46

Cool. Thanks.

I tried to fix him , any better now ? His name is Ahmed so far.

The position and angle of the arms is a bit off and weird but i just wanted to show his body rather than make him stand normally. It would be fixed later.

Damien · Fri 16/04/2004 09:46:18

Looks good.
There's something about his left arm, try moving it inside a bit and make it as long as his right arm.

Andail · Fri 16/04/2004 09:46:48

Set down his shoulder a bit, he looks awfully tense now. Also his arms need to be longer.

oh, and try to make the closer foot overlap the other, or set them further apart.

Karimi · Fri 16/04/2004 10:57:43

Ahmed

There we go , tried to adjust it to make him look less awkward.

P.S. : Andail try putting C&C in your dictionary.

Peter Thomas · Fri 16/04/2004 11:06:36

Ahmed is teh looking cool!

The left arm looks a lot better now that it's closer to the body, and that dress does WONDERS for his figure...

He even has those sexy sandals! (which look a lot better with one foot overlapping...)

CJL · Fri 16/04/2004 13:45:11

Hay,

The main thing I don't like is the nose. Don't get me wrong, it's a nice nose...it's just not arabian. In general (though I must admit not always) an arab nose faces point-down, whereas yours faces up. As a result it's hard to recognise his etnic background.

Groetjes,

CJL

Karimi · Fri 16/04/2004 14:05:30

Good point, lol , i live in an arab country and i forgot . Thanks, lemme try to fix it up a bit.

Hmm, any better ?

I fixed it a bit more so its more curved down but only slightly.

CJL · Fri 16/04/2004 15:18:09

Quote from: Karimi on Fri 16/04/2004 14:05:30Hmm, any better?

Jep...looks good.

Ozwalled · Fri 16/04/2004 20:44:42

I find that the far foot looks funny. Maybe it should be tilted back more, so that the toes are looking closer to one another...

(ugh, that explanation sucks... sorry...)