c&c my background, please

Started by Secret Fawful, Sat 31/07/2004 16:43:37

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Secret Fawful

this is a background for part two of my game, the treasure thieves.http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/albaqurque_mansion.jpg
let me know what you think. the mansion is supposed to be shaped like that.

UP

Well, the lighting is a bit weird, since first of all, in one spot, you can't see anything of the wall (even though the whole wall should be at least almost equally shadowed), and on the left side there's most light (and way too much in my opinion), but still the main shadow of the house and the source of light (the moon) isn't anywhere like that...

Secret Fawful


Secret Fawful

by the way
those shadowed parts are not the sides
unlike most mansions , this one has only three sides
the other two sides are on the back of the place

HJRodrigo

The shadows don't make much sense. I did a fast edit to put all the lighted sides facing what I asumed was their light source (The moon).
http://members.cox.net/hjrodrigo/quickedit.png

Secret Fawful

heres my edithttp://www.2dadventure.com/ags/albaqurque-_mansion.jpg

-changed the shadow and lighting on the mansion completely around to match the light source

-got rid of the mansion's shadow[on the ground] altogether

-darkened the lighting on the mansion

-put some dried blood coming out of the window and dripped on the one under it for a creepy effect

let me know what you think

UP

Ah, well much better...

By the way, I thought the house was round  ;D

Secret Fawful

thanks

and no its a triangle on it's side

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