mudi.. no wait, midi for c&c

Eigen · Wed 01/09/2004 12:22:30

Here's one midi I wrote, but there's something not quite right.
Maybe it sounds a little empty?

Click here to listen

-Eigen

mousemat · Wed 01/09/2004 12:27:47

i like it .
the only thing i dont like though is there is only 1 or 2 instraments in it.but maybe thats not a problem.

Skurai · Wed 01/09/2004 12:53:38

I'm far from an expert on music, but i thought that was really good.

Russtaccio · Thu 02/09/2004 00:04:45

I like it. Sounds kind of like villagey music from a Sqauresoft RPG. Maybe just add some hi-hats and then when it picks up add a bass drum and maybe a light snare. Keep it up!

n3tgraph · Thu 02/09/2004 08:13:35

the biggest thing you are missing here is dynamics in the piano part, each note has the same volume which makes it sound fake. if you can try changing the piano / pizzstring volumes.

that would improve it a lot

happy composing

UP · Thu 02/09/2004 13:05:37

A few notes here and there are off, those bugged me from time to time... But it's quite a lot what the others have said, especially N3TGraph.

And it's a little bit too happy for my taste, especially since it's parts are not all that differing, but that's just me, don't worry about that.

sedriss · Thu 02/09/2004 18:04:32

At first, it sounded kinda like a Blink 182 song, then like the theme-song of BaSS.. but thats just my imagination going wild.Ã,Â

I like it!

Mr Flibble · Thu 02/09/2004 22:26:07

I like it. But to stop it getting repetitive I would introduce a clarinet perhaps at the 12 second mark. Do you mind if I do a quick edit?

EDIT: I have made a quick edit of your song. In retrospect it sounds terrible, but it was only a quickie. It may sound better if you change the top bar instrument back to what it was.

Listen

Gregjazz · Sat 04/09/2004 19:55:35

Dynamics, please!

Also, maybe make the flute an octave higher, and sustain the melody notes.