First game-like sprite - front & back & walkcycle

Started by voh, Fri 02/09/2005 18:14:39

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voh





This is the first of these I've ever made. I used MrCollossal's template as a basis, but simplified it so that I could work with it. Criticize it, because yeah, well, just because I asked? :)
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Corey

the only thing i have to say is: his arms are really tight against his body... nobody stands like that i gues , i like the rest  ;)
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Darth Mandarb

As Corey pointed out, the arms look like he's hunching his shoulders in a bit. 

I would recommend broadening the shoulders (thus moving the arms out a bit).

Does anybody, besides me, think he totally looks like Dale Dye?
(with white hair that is)

voh

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Gilbert


GarageGothic

#5
Of course it's Dick van Dyke, in Diagnosis Murder if I'm not mistaken. Very good likeness. The only thing that bothers me a bit is the part of the coat seen through between his legs. It took me a while to figure out what I was looking at. Perhaps the color is too similar to his shirt, or I just have a dirty mind focusing on what's between people's legs. ;)

Edit: Or show a few pixels of his pants at the endge of the coat. Right now it seems as if his hip/crotch area is a square instead of an upside down triangle.

voh

Here's the work I've done so far... Not amazing, but still :)

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Matt Frith

Oh my, Diagnosis Murder would be a Legendary adventure game, carry on good sir!Ã,  Also the sprite is awesome, put the frames together and post the full animation :D

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Sam.

if you're making a diagnosis murder adventure game, you should be worshipped, if you can make the rest oif the characters at a consistent quality level, it should look really good.
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voh

I'm playing around with the idea to make a Diagnosis Murder game, but I've got one project to do before that - so for now it's just practice :)
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Corey

Greatest thrill
Not to kill
But to have the prize of the night
Hypocrite
Wannabe friend
13th disciple who betrayed me for nothing!

GarageGothic

The legs are much better now. Good work. But I can't really tell about the animation before I see it moving. His eyes disturb me a bit now that you've put white around the pupils.

voh

I am too lazy to make an animated gif out of it :p
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MarVelo

It appears that in the animation his legs are toooooo long when he is walking. The thigh section seems to be to long when the leg is extented.

AlbinoPanther

It is realy good.Just keep quality high for the other characters.
And your game will be GRATE!!!!

Akumayo

Cool looking, his upward (away from camera) animation looks a little weird though.  I could be wrong, but when it plays out in aa real animation file I think his legs will appear to sway, like he's drunk or something.
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