Dancing Disco

Started by MarVelo, Sat 10/12/2005 22:52:15

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MarVelo

NO background Yet but I am only looking for crits on the dance floor.


Krysis

It lacks perspective. You need a vanishing point. Check a tutorial or something. Nice colors.

MarVelo

gottcha I thought so. Im about to fix it now.

MarVelo

all fixed, I think it is much better now. Also, Suggestions for a BG behind the console are welcome.


DoorKnobHandle

The perspective on the ground tiles is still off if you want them to be square sized!

This is a very quick sketch of how they should look (again: only if they should be squares):


MarVelo

Thanks, but I dont want them that square. Still, any suggests for behind the Console?

vict0r

As i remember, normal blinking dancefloor tiles usually are square :P Anyway. Just have a normal wall. Look around you, and see how your own walls look.

Ashen

A nice-but-potentially-nightmarish-to-do idea would be a mirror wall.

An easier suggestion would be a wall of band posters/photos/album covers. At this scale, they don't have to be anything too recognisable (maybe a pair of Rolling Stones Lips, or a little pixelised 'Abbey Road' cover), but it might be more interesting than just a flat coloured wall.
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MarVelo

#8
I have been going over the prosepects, and the mirror is impossible for my meager skills. So here it is.





MarVelo

#9
EDITED

Gilbert

For a disco background I think it's too bright, the floor is okay as it's supposed to be glowing, the upper part I'll expect it to be much darker.

Phemar

It's nice, and the pattern of flashing is good. However I don't think you should use a combo of pink and green together ... they kinda clash.

Krysis

The perspective on the dJ-place is pretty wrong and the posters don't have the right shape. Most posters have a []-shape. 



I know its a really really crappy and fastly-made paintover. You can add a door or something, some big bad speakersn maybe hang an english flag on the wall or put a discoball. A traffic sign would look good too. Just a couple of ideas really.

MarVelo


Krysis

Dude, do you know what people in East Europe and Russia hate? People writhing crap that makes no sence. Just PM me with the stuff you wanna write and I'll send you a pic how the way they should look.

MarVelo

Thats for the heads up

MarVelo

New version, thanks to krysis



vict0r

What? :o No more blinking :P ;D

MarVelo

dont worry, It will still blink in the end, it is just very time consuming to use Image Ready to make the Giff

i k a r i

I think the dance floor should be in a platform, because it doesn't seem to fit there...with that wooden floor  :)
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