Alien character C&C, please

[AlbinoPanther]

Ã,  EDIT: 1


Ã,  EDIT: 2

We want him to be simple.But not too simple we need a few details?
And his arms are not quit right but how to improove them?
Every advice is helpfull

THANKS[/color]

[mozza]

Maybe if you move his shoulders up a little bit, his arms out a little, and make his head slightly less sharp.
I'll try to do a quick paint-over to show.

EDIT:



Yeah, you've probably got it better than I do.
Try moving his arms away from his body like I did.

[AlbinoPanther]

Thanks Mozza.

Is this better, what else we could make better?

[Gilbert]

The colour is really really dark, at least when viewed with this monitor here it looks like it's a just a shape filled with black, I can't make out detail until I stick closely to the screen.
Unless it's intended to be filled like that (to make it look more mystery or something like that), I'll recommend:
1. lighten the colours, or
2. change the colour of the outlines to bright colours (even white)

[i k a r i]

I agree with gilbot, you should consider change his colours, because he looks like the shadow of an alien..

[AlbinoPanther]

Well on our monitor it looks bright enough.But if you say so we will change his color.

Can anyboy tell us how to do a propper shading on him.

i k a r and Gilbot thanks .

And Mozza we will move his arms thanks for advice .

[AlbinoPanther]

Edited see first post.
Do we have to make it brighter is it better what can we improove?

THANKS[/b]

[AlbinoPanther]

PLEASE[/b]

[mozza]

I think it is great as it is. You could make the colours a bit brighter unless it effects the gameplay. For detail or something you could give him a flesh-wound or scars or something according to his personality.

[ManicMatt]

I can't help but feel that maybe your monitor's brightness is turned up higher than average? It's a tad too dark for me too, even in the new edit.

An alien sure has got me intrigued about the story..