The Face of Corruption Chapter One

[Chicky]

Wow! When did you get a decent camera? The new screenshots look fab, good job on nailing that art style.

[Digital Mosaic Games]

Cool Man!!! :o
I can´t wait to play it!

[i k a r i]

This looks promising indeed!... I will definetely give it a try 

[xenogia]

Thanks Chicky, its a slow but wonderful process to get everything exactly how I want it.  Haha, and yes new camera

[Chicky]

Re-shooting the original bg's, right? I really think it would be worth it.

[xenogia]

Yeah and making sure all the lighting is all correct, hopefully this game will bring a new visual style to AGS games.  Even though the FMV characters have been done before in an AGS game.

[Sslaxx]

Stupid question here, this is going to be a commercial game then?

[xenogia]

Sskaxx: Nope this isn't going to be a commercial game, its just for fun.. Even though I have spent a bit of money on it, over $2000 now.  But its a hobby.. lol

[Sslaxx]

Sskaxx: Nope this isn't going to be a commercial game, its just for fun.. Even though I have spent a bit of money on it, over $2000 now.  But its a hobby.. lol

Really? Rather you than me then... seriously, I'd attempt to recoup that money.

[xenogia]

I would consider it, if I felt the need to..  Well the most likely thing I would do is see how the first one does as freeware and then maybe consider future installments as paid releases.

[makinva]

God ! I hope this is going to be freeware !

[xenogia]

As stated before Makinva, it is going to be freeware

[fischkopf]

This looks very professional keep up the good work.
I can't believe this is going to be Free

[xenogia]

Just thought I would add another screenshot for people
If your wondering why this screen is in black and white, it's because it's a flashback sequence.

[xenogia]

Just letting everyone know that I've updated the first post to represent the game correctly.

[Snarky]

From that last screenshot, I'd recommend you ask someone to look over your writing and punctuation to get them up to professional quality.

-"God" should be uppercase.
-You need some kind of punctuation to break up the two parts of that statement. I'd go with "For God's sake, Guy! There are others..." A semicolon would be another alternative.
-"working in the police" sounds odd; the phrasing is slightly unidiomatic in English. Probably "in the police department", or just "there are other police working..."
-"as well as you" sounds a little clumsy to me, but I'm not sure how I'd rephrase it.

The errors aren't egregious (the punctuation problem is the most serious), but when you're putting so much work into the production values it's a shame to have the effect ruined by something that's so easy to fix.

[aedwards00]

Perhaps something along the lines of "You're not the only one in the police force!" or "There are other police involved besides you!"

To me those sound a bit more idiomatic as Snarky says.

[hedgefield]

This is looking hella good. Can't wait to see it in motion.

[xenogia]

Thanks Snarky, just to let you know the text is actually first draft text from the writer so it will improve.  But I will take it into consideration thats for sure and get it sounding better.

EDIT: I'm also lucky that the lip synching doesn't follow the text (speech).  Though none of the voice acting will be done until the end of the development cycle.  On a good note, I've given the script to my girlfriend who is a english major.   Yay

[Dualnames]

Looks terribly good! Stop updating this so often! I can't hide my enthusiasm. To note it, I hate FMV graphic-style games or whatever you call them. This one however itches me to play!!