Initial game sequence Logo design

[SinSin]

Can anyone think of anything to improve this image or is it enough , Its for the initial sequence of my game and will be on show for about 5 seconds, so i dont think i should go too deep with it

[Babar]

Add a few less saturated dots to show distace?
Not sure what I´m looking at, but it seems like some sort of starfield

[SinSin]

Tis paint splatter my dear fellow ...

[Questionable]

Trigger Happy Entertainment = Paint Splatter?  I think you've missed an opportunity for extreme awesomeness...

[SinSin]

edit   new version with gunshot instead of globs ...

[Ali]

I'm sorry to say that I think you have your answer in Babar's response. If he (and I) couldn't tell what it was then I think it needs to be redesigned. The shapes don't seem very like a splat, and the primary colours mean that it's not distinctive. A white background would also help it look more like a splat. As Questionable points out, they don't bear any relation to your name.

While a red splay on white wouldn't be to my taste, it would have a better impact!

[Captain Ricco]

I like that alien eye thingy... dont quite understand it though

Had nothing to do, some fruit for thought

[Ryan Timothy B]

I like that alien eye thingy... dont quite understand it though

Isn't it supposed to be some sort of bullet hole with blood coming down it?
Either way, looking at it quickly it definitely looks like a really poorly drawn vag.  I would definitely incinerate that image from your choices of title screens.

[Dualnames]

Just to show you what you can do:

[Questionable]

RESERVED FOR EDIT!

I have ANOTHER idea that would be cool...

[Dualnames]

I like that alien eye thingy... dont quite understand it though

Isn't it supposed to be some sort of bullet hole with blood coming down it?
Either way, looking at it quickly it definitely looks like a really poorly drawn vag.  I would definitely incinerate that image from your choices of title screens.

It's supposed to be a trigger close up with the weapon looking up.

[SinSin]

back to zee drawing board again here   will update in time

cheers to all candc

[Atelier]

Hmm, trigger happy = paint splat? Perhaps, if it's a paintball gun. Just add a sound effect of a paintball gun firing in quick succession, accompanied by the splats appearing on the screen, and it should be fine! As for making it more like a splat, take a spin with the splat brush on Photoshop.

[Ryan Timothy B]

It's supposed to be a trigger close up with the weapon looking up.

I'm not talking about the picture by Ricco, it doesn't resemble a vagina in any form.  I'm talking about the 2nd image by SinSin.

[Anian]

A picture of a Yosemite Sam look-alike perhaps, shooting into the air.