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his arms are maybe a bit too pointy. Give them shape. Show where the forearms meets the upperarms. Also make the upper arms longer

I tried a couple of times doing this but it just looks weird, so i think i'll let the arms be. : I think ill start on some sideviews now Post them when they are ready

I think the text is too... well... unfinished maybe. Try some other, possibly smoother, font. Someone else could probably explain it better than me

If it involves a dead milkman from the 1930's, it can't be bad...

Agree!

Btw. didnt you use to be called king nipper?

That movie really really really sucked

why not make a game of: "Steven King's IT" ?? I'm sure it will be a thrilling horror adventureÃ, 

No, it would probably be a lousy game with a clown who eats children, and turns into a spider. Maybe even worse than the movie

Simon Birch

i'm gods instrument

you forgot the "/"

No more crits? C'mon people! I need to make it better

I had a similar experience some years ago. I hade a really high fever, and even though i werent sleeping it felt like my bed was spinning really fast around while a horde of furious colours attacked me. And i had no chance of getting out of the bed, being too dizzy. Not a pleasant episode! Especially since i was wide awake

err... you usually have your arms that way?

Indeed, yes, my arms tend to look like natural, human arms.

and he looks too happy and his eyes are too white ! (and his arms are too thin)

I didn't know that you couldn't handle a paintover/constructive criticism.
It won't happen again. (And I mean that.)

Dont take what im saying too serious Please, continue critisizing And when you are at it, take it with a smile, instead of anger and sarcasm That wont get you anywhere

Chicken with a pulley in the middle 2.0 turbo with his friend Edmundo the bum.

Next: Mr. Kajak in a thong robbing the international bank of adventure games.

Did some small changes on him(including more shading in the face)

What do you think now?

err... you usually have your arms that way? and he looks too happy and his eyes are too white ! (and his arms are too thin)

Hehe Go ahead. I am also making another game, so it would be nice if you could make that, while i make the other

Besides I have McGyver graphics to work on

You are making a MacGyver game too? :o

as for the shoulders- mmm, i think i will lower em'

Shoulders? What Shoulders? He dont seem to have any, so dont lower them Dont add any either! He looks more like the lazy, narrow-shouldered type of guy.

Concerning the black outline: I'm not a big fan of it, but it seems to be fine for your style. I'd just not make it as thick. It shouldn't be wider than one pixel imo.

Agree. Looking at his eyes, it look like he's wearing glasses

What about now? I think the arms are abit too long now, but what do you think?

I liked the shoes better the first version. Now they look more like dutch wooden shoes or something Just try to give him some heels, now it looks like he could tip over any minute I also noticed that the shoe that is closest is smaller than the other. Unless his feet are abit weird i think you should fix this.

EDIT: Good job afflict. (the nearest shoe is still bigger than the other tho )

Ait!
-Removed the 566000 useless colors
-Improved his pitiful hands
-Enlargened his biceps
-Made his hair look cool (IMO)

No, sorry He probably wont be for MacGyver(but who knows really? ) Doing two game projects at the same time now so, this one is for the other game




Changed his colors, added a belt, added a bracelet/watch and gave him a new hairdo
What do you think? C'mon people give me something to work with!