Short Animation

Started by Krazy, Fri 10/09/2004 15:05:42

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Krazy

Here's a short flash animation I made for fun. I'm not sure why I made it, I just really like drawing and animating.
http://home.graffiti.net/sunfungames:graffiti.net/man.html
I don't know if I'm very good yet though, but eh I'm only 13.  :P
Critiques please.
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Sam.

hehe, i like it. kind neat stlye, i like the b/w, it make sit feel better.
Bye bye thankyou I love you.

Krazy

Thanks and yeah, I tried colouring it but it just didn't feel right.
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Ali

I think it's terrific, It reminds me of the Morph cartoons. The only thing I'd suggest is altering his dive little, just before he disappeats his arm is in an odd position - a little close to his body I think.

Phemar


Hey that's pretty sweet. As said by Ali, alter the dive a bit. I'd also make him got to blob form when he dives so it looks like the animation is a loop.

Krazy

Quote from: Ali on Fri 10/09/2004 15:53:06
I think it's terrific, It reminds me of the Morph cartoons. The only thing I'd suggest is altering his dive little, just before he disappeats his arm is in an odd position - a little close to his body I think.

Ok, I'll try fixing it. And yes it is inspired from those old claymation shows such as Morph and Gumby.
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pslocum

Nice animation. Conveys a lot of personality. Outside of the dive, I don't see anything that needs improvement.

Eggie

I like it alot. Especially the animation when he oushes the button.

Krazy

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