Do these opening intro screens look good to you?

[Isegrim]

It's a bit empty...

basically just a blue and two green blobs...
You should add some trees, bushes and rocks, perhaps.
As for the water: make it lighter at the shores to simulate some depth.

[R4L]

I can't really draw plants and I ain't really good with water so I think I won't use it. I tried making rocks and a tree but it was terrible.

I need some advice man.

[Moresco]

Maybe you should start by sketching some simple things, like a glass or a box or something in your room.  It helps to get an idea of how to draw what you see first, and then draw what you imagine second.  That's just my opinion, and what I had to do to get anywhere with my drawing.  

You could also search google for beginning drawing lessons or something, tutorials...there should also be a ton of tutorials available through the forums here.  Just try to have fun with it. ^^

[R4L]

Thanks for the advice! I went and searched it up and got something, but I decided to not use that.

   UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!
My demo of Cosmo Colatterals Adventure is being sent to the crying flower website! I don't know how long it will take to actually be on the site but rest assure me that it might be soon!