My first character ever

spoofer4ever · Tue 13/04/2004 13:06:05

So this is my very first character REMEMBER im only 11 so thats why its so horrible

Im making a lil Joke game but im not saying nothing....yet

So whataya think. What should i change? (besides everything)
I know i suck but that's as good as i can do. :'(

Darth Mandarb · Tue 13/04/2004 13:08:50

There are a couple of 'rogue' pixels hanging out that should probably be removed (hands/sleeves area).

The torso is too long and the legs too short. Bring up the waist and lengthen the legs!

For a first effort it's not bad.

spoofer4ever · Tue 13/04/2004 13:51:05

How about now?

Quote from: Darth Mandarb on Tue 13/04/2004 13:08:50
There are a couple of 'rogue' pixels hanging out that should probably be removed (hands/sleeves area).

What do you mean by rogue?

big brother · Tue 13/04/2004 14:10:21

There's a bunch of information about rogues on this site:

http://www.danddheroes.com/ddh/rogue.php

And some more pictures here:

http://www.gfsnet.org/msweb/academics/resources/activities/Dungeons%20and%20Dragons/DungeonsandDragons.html

According to the first site, here are some of the Rogue's special moves:

QuoteHide & Move Silentlyâ€" Slipping out of sight, she is so adept at hiding that monsters pass right by herâ€¦ until they feel a knife in their back!

Vampire Arrow â€" An arrow that takes life from its victim and returns it to the Rogue! The higher the power, the higher the return!

Wild Blades â€" A fierce combo of dagger strikes that slash, jab and split the enemy!

How exciting!

spoofer4ever · Tue 13/04/2004 14:18:00

I think he ment a different type of rouge big bro, lol

I took out his blocky mouth and gave him a tiny smile

not much of a change but ,meh.. what the hell

Darth Mandarb · Tue 13/04/2004 14:51:39

The new torso/legs look much better!

By 'rogue' pixels I meant there were some pixels hanging off the edges that shouldn't be there! (double-pixels if you will)

Looks like you got rid of them.

The new version is an improvement and I like the addition of some shading.

Keep it up!

Phemar · Tue 13/04/2004 14:59:51

I think what he meant by 'rogue', not rouge, which is french, is this:

When you draw with a brush tool, it creates 'rogues'. You should always edit these out of your image. The one on the right is the dited image.

Erwin_Br · Tue 13/04/2004 23:51:21

Well, you're doing a much better job than I at that age. When I was eleven, we didn't even have Paint, let alone PhotoShop.

As a matter of fact, I didn't even have a decent PC until I was 14 or so.

Your character looks hilarious, btw, with the underwear and cape!

--Erwin

spoofer4ever · Wed 14/04/2004 02:48:09

Thanx Erwin! I only joined ags 3 days ago or somtin like dat so this is my first crit post.

Ty zork for filling me on on the rouge pix'x

-Arman

rtf · Wed 14/04/2004 03:39:00

Captain Underpants fan game, no?