Evil Monk

[KristjanMan]

I made this char for no reason and it's no going to be in a game just want c&c on it


he is supposed to look like a RuneScape monster http://www.runehq.com/RHQMonsterView.php?id=81/

[Afflict]

Its beter than the 3d one

Characture him make some more identifying features...

[DutchMarco]

His dress needs more detail. His feet are in a very unnatural position. His head is off to one side, without being tilted over to any side (it it's straight up but a few pixels to the side). The hands are too straight, try twisting them (putting a perspective on it).

Hope this helps.

[lo_res_man]

Here is a quick edit I did, hope it helps. I relize it has some errors, but I still think its kinda nice.  Used all the same colours as you, but one.

[Corey]

you could add some shading like progzmax always does.

[lo_res_man]

I ain't Progzmax, I am lo res man. Besides it was just a quick edit, and if you don't like it, edit it your self.
( not trying to be rude and all)

[Nikolas]

He could be reffereing to someone else you knwo and not you. Just because his post is directly after yours dowesn't necessairly mean that he's talking to you.

He could be tlaking to Kristjianblah blah... sorry

[lo_res_man]

ok sorry, but I thought it was directed at me because 1) KristjanMan's IS shaded (somewhat) 2) it was, as you said, right after mine.
sorry