Little Jonny Evils (plural).... UPDATE!! CARTOONY GOODNESS!!11!

Started by KANDYMAN-IAC, Mon 05/04/2004 03:26:50

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KANDYMAN-IAC

Mon 05/04/2004 03:26:50 Last Edit: Thu 15/04/2004 05:04:32 by KANDYMAN-IAC
I'm not sure which style to head with... plus i would like opinions just on general style composition... if they look constipated etc...

go nuts... edit stuff. I crave input...

What style suits best... how can i compliment the first game or are you guys unhappy with this tampering with the style???




"Don't lose the bluecups they may be our only hope....!!1!!!1"

"I'm jealous of all of you guys, which means. I love your work, I just hate you as a person.... wait thats not right."

Andail

#1
Mon 05/04/2004 08:38:47
The second version is definitely better...although it'd be funny if he had some sort of malicious grin on his face...now he's not really evil, just angry :)

Nice to see you're back in business anyway!

Chicky

#2
Mon 05/04/2004 09:39:42
i have to disagreee,

i prefer the style of the first one. Looks more evil and "cool".

-OSC

Privateer Puddin'

#3
Mon 05/04/2004 09:41:36
second with the smile of the third (original?)

KANDYMAN-IAC

#4
Mon 05/04/2004 11:16:23
The third isn't the original... and is actually a third option.... replay Little Jonny and you can see that there is a fairly sizeable redesign as compared to the third image.
"Don't lose the bluecups they may be our only hope....!!1!!!1"

"I'm jealous of all of you guys, which means. I love your work, I just hate you as a person.... wait thats not right."

Pet Terry

#5
Mon 05/04/2004 12:07:59 Last Edit: Mon 05/04/2004 12:08:46 by Petteri
I've seen the third one before, but I have to say that the second one is the best of those three. But as custard said, it would be even better with that smile from the third one.

Looks really good btw, keep it up.
<SSH> heavy pettering
Screen 7

Eggie

#6
Mon 05/04/2004 18:57:23
I love the first one.
I guess I'm just a sucker for big hair.

Plus, the second one looks a little bit like a small adult than a child...

Penguinx

#7
Mon 05/04/2004 19:00:15
Eggie, I too like the first one. The overall pose is better. His legs being together looks more natural.

MrColossal

#8
Tue 06/04/2004 00:12:37
how old is he again?

the second one with his cheekbones and angular chin and jaw makes him look like a small man.

the first has more of a child like quality though i think it could be beefed up a little [the child like quality, not muscles]
"This must be a good time to live in, since Eric bothers to stay here at all"-CJ also: ACHTUNG FRANZ!

BerserkerTails

#9
Tue 06/04/2004 01:47:20
I looooooooooove the second one most out of all. He looks so... Ready for action. Like Rockman or something.
I make music.

Phemar

#10
Tue 06/04/2004 06:05:05

1st head. 2nd body....

KANDYMAN-IAC@UNI

#11
Tue 06/04/2004 06:09:21
He is approx 7 or 8 years of age.

How would you guys describe your impression of LJE...

your feel for the character...

I want to make sure i am staying true to a the style everyone loves...

(i'm sure i've got a storyline people will love)

BruisedWeasel

#12
Tue 06/04/2004 06:13:33
I figured out what it is puts me off about jonny. His head shape. It's all angly, which I know is good for evilness, but it's bad for kids. Kids are soft round creatures, full of plump organs and baby fat. Succulent little creatures. Remember Damien from the Omen? He wasn't all angles, but cherubic. Delectible in his plumpness. One could feast on his entrails for days. Jonny's angular jaw looks like a teen's jaw, instead of a little boy. And he isn't Teeny-bopper Jonny Evil, he's Little Jonny Evil. Give that tot some fresh goatsmilk.

KANDYMAN-IAC

#13
Tue 06/04/2004 06:35:48 Last Edit: Tue 06/04/2004 06:49:33 by KANDYMAN-IAC
No. 2 with No. 1's head.... mmmmmm interesting.

Like this???



BRUISED? I see what you mean.... i gotta lose the angles but keep the mean...



mmmm maybe its time to start sketching a fresh image.
"Don't lose the bluecups they may be our only hope....!!1!!!1"

"I'm jealous of all of you guys, which means. I love your work, I just hate you as a person.... wait thats not right."

Melly

#14
Tue 06/04/2004 07:05:00
Ooh, give the rounded faced redo the smirk and it'd be disturbing. Jonny's looking much eviler now.

Ben

#15
Tue 06/04/2004 22:44:56
He definitely needs the grin.. Also, the lines look a bit thick under the chin. It makes him look like he has a goatee.. I don't know if that's what you wanted or not- just pointing it out. Overall it's really good work. I like the rounded face you have in the new ones. Makes him look much more childlike, which is a good contrast to the evilness..

KANDYMAN-IAC

#16
Mon 12/04/2004 15:06:31
OK... here is the added grin....



plus i have a dilema... the original jonny animation moves same arm as leg...  

Exhibit A...



should i keep this flawed trait as a character definition... or should i correct it... i never meant it to be flawed originally....????
"Don't lose the bluecups they may be our only hope....!!1!!!1"

"I'm jealous of all of you guys, which means. I love your work, I just hate you as a person.... wait thats not right."

Jazz_Miester

#17
Tue 13/04/2004 02:47:15
mmmmm i guess its styleised... and it makes him unique...

but if the flaw wasn't intentional, i guess its a judgement call, i haven't actually played the game what is it about???

Kweepa

#18
Tue 13/04/2004 08:53:56
Don't keep the flaw.
It spoils an otherwise excellent animation!
Still waiting for Purity of the Surf II

Peter Thomas

#19
Tue 13/04/2004 10:27:47
I love the final outcome.

Has "crazy biatch" written all over it.

And fix the walk-cycle. The people 'in the know' will figure out why it's 'wrong', but everybody else will just think you've screwed up. Which would be bad...
Peter: "Being faggy isn't bad!"
AGA: "Shush, FAG!"
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