Just a little piece I wrote for an English essay. It's meant to be a kind ambulatory poem, written in strict iambic quadrameter. Being a mandatory assignment, it's nothing too personal.
CLARITY
The chilly brook behind my house
leads to a tree where ravens nest
And in the shade of solid boughs
I sometimes choose to take my rest
But not today (a day in June)
Today I need to swiftly move
By quick-paced strides I'm set in tune
and find my track, my route, my groove
For every step a thought is placed
and neatly sorted in my mind
And memories revived, retraced
allow me to in peace unwind
Some thoughts are fuelled by Intellect
- though some may need to be refined
Yet others gain from strict neglect
best left alone inside my mind
For every step another tree
- just like the rocks devoid of name -
flies by, runs by, outside of me
forgotten soon, but still the same
I pass a cottage where I stay
just briefly for a cup of tea
of camomile or plain Earl Gray
- It makes no difference to me
Then off again, to reach the lake
that constitutes my goal this day
It is on normal days opaque
from all its bottom mud and clay
But lo! Today brought clarity
as clear as thoughts and lakes can be.
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Opinions?
CLARITY
The chilly brook behind my house
leads to a tree where ravens nest
And in the shade of solid boughs
I sometimes choose to take my rest
But not today (a day in June)
Today I need to swiftly move
By quick-paced strides I'm set in tune
and find my track, my route, my groove
For every step a thought is placed
and neatly sorted in my mind
And memories revived, retraced
allow me to in peace unwind
Some thoughts are fuelled by Intellect
- though some may need to be refined
Yet others gain from strict neglect
best left alone inside my mind
For every step another tree
- just like the rocks devoid of name -
flies by, runs by, outside of me
forgotten soon, but still the same
I pass a cottage where I stay
just briefly for a cup of tea
of camomile or plain Earl Gray
- It makes no difference to me
Then off again, to reach the lake
that constitutes my goal this day
It is on normal days opaque
from all its bottom mud and clay
But lo! Today brought clarity
as clear as thoughts and lakes can be.
---
Opinions?